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Wednesday 17 June 2020

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Instructions:
Watch the video about the iceberg. You are the captain of the Titanic and are having to
make decisions quickly as you see the iceberg come into view. You need to think about
what happens before, during and after they hit the iceberg. You are NOT writing
about the Titanic sinking just hitting the iceberg.


Example: 
  • Beginning: Captain has realised that there is an iceberg ahead - what do you do?
  • Middle: Hitting the iceberg, what does this look like and feel like?
  • End: What are you going to need to do to check on your crew and passengers?


Plan your writing here:


Introduction: (Orientation: who, when, where)

Captain: What kind of captain are you? Describe this person 

Problem: Problem is hitting the iceberg

Solution: How will you look after your ship until you figure out what is going on?



Start Writing below:


It was finally set off the titanic it was set off in April the 10 1912 at 12,pm the titanic was amazing there
was a heated swimming pool two gyms 4 restaurants and over 100 rooms! It took up 800 tons of coal
a day for it's sizes it's top speed is 27 mph the titanic came from Southampton and is travelling to new
York city 4 days later it happened my worst nightmare it happened on April the 14 1912 at 11.40 pm it hit
something big it was an iceberg!! The whole ship was breaking apart the problem was that there wasn't
enough lifeboats for every person so some people drowned but i lived Through it all i was one of the
hundreds of people that were on board and that's what happened the end 

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